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Barcelona THANK YOU FOR CHECKING THIS! I'm happy to say that I'm going to Barcelona, Spain in September. I have been there 7 years ago and it's time to visit this wonderful summer city again, to see great Gaudi's buildings, to eat paella and to drink sangria. I hope the weather will be fine and will let me to enjoy the Sun and the Mediterranean sea. In addition to Barcelona I want to visit Tarragona and Sitges in Catalonia and Cadaques and Perpignan in France. I'm going to fly to Barcelona by plane. It takes 4 hours to reach there from Saint-Petersburg and it's a some kind of inconvenience for me because I don't really like to fly more than 3 hours. But Barcelona deserves me to suffer a little. I know that pleasure of visiting it will be much more than my inconvenience in flight. I'm taking with me my best summer dresses, several newly bought shoes, my swimsuits and my amazing hat wich I've bought in Greece last year. Also I'm taking a couple of books to read on the beach. It won't be anything serious, just easy reading for relax. Oh, I almost forget about English! Of course, my tablet with apps for studying English is going with me. But first of all I'm taking with me my good mood and my wish to visit many interesting places and to meet with many interesting people in Spain. Despite I don't like long flights, I generally like to travel by plane. I like my way from home to the airport by taxi, I like to drink coffee before boarding and to see so many people traveling to so many different destinations. I have a little tradition before every flight. I drink a cup of coffee in the same cafe at the same table with a view to a runway and post a pre-flight photo to Instagram. On board I prefer to read books or to listen music. The first place I'm going to visit in Barcelona is Bokeria market. I'm dreaming about some freshcoocked seafood and a glass of rose wine there. Another my dream about food is a croissant with almond cream in a cafe in the Casa Vicens. And of course I'm going to go to the sea every evening and will watch for the Sun goes down. Oh, I just can't wait to do all this nice things.

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Barcelona

THANK YOU FOR CHECKING THIS!

I'm happy to say that I'm going to Barcelona, Spain in September. I was have been there 7 years ago and it's time to visit this wonderful summer city again. (A new sentence works best here.) I hope to see great Gaudi's great buildings, to eat paella and to drink sangria. I hope the weather will be fine and will let me to enjoy the Sun sun and the Mediterranean sea. In addition to Barcelona I want to visit Tarragona and Sitges in Catalonia, as well as and Cadaques and Perpignan in France. (You used 'and' a bit much so it needed breaking up.)

I will be flying to Barcelona from St Petersburg. It's a 4hour flight which is inconvenient because I don't really like to fly for more than 3 hours at a time. I'm going to fly to Barcelona by plane. It takes 4 hours to reach there from Saint-Petersburg and it's a some kind of inconvenience for me because I don't really like to fly more than 3 hours. (Your version isn't wrong, I just thought I would re-word to make it flow better.) But Barcelona is worth the pain/hassle. deserves me to suffer a little. I know that the pleasure of visiting it will be greater than much more than the my inconvenience in getting there. flight.

(I only corrected up to here because it was quite a large notebook entry.)

I'm taking with me my best summer dresses, several newly bought shoes, my swimsuits and my amazing hat wich I've bought in Greece last year. Also I'm taking a couple of books to read on the beach. It won't be anything serious, just easy reading for relax. Oh, I almost forget about English! Of course, my tablet with apps for studying English is going with me. But first of all I'm taking with me my good mood and my wish to visit many interesting places and to meet with many interesting people in Spain.

Despite I don't like long flights, I generally like to travel by plane. I like my way from home to the airport by taxi, I like to drink coffee before boarding and to see so many people traveling to so many different destinations. I have a little tradition before every flight. I drink a cup of coffee in the same cafe at the same table with a view to a runway and post a pre-flight photo to Instagram. On board I prefer to read books or to listen music.

The first place I'm going to visit in Barcelona is Bokeria market. I'm dreaming about some freshcoocked seafood and a glass of rose wine there. Another my dream about food is a croissant with almond cream in a cafe in the Casa Vicens. And of course I'm going to go to the sea every evening and will watch for the Sun goes down. Oh, I just can't wait to do all this nice things.

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