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Cynthia
please, could you correct my mistakes in these sentences, thank you!
I've recently practiced my English grammar, please, let me know if there has any mistakes.
charity:
The charity received many clothes from students.
They organized a charity activity for money to help poor people.
attendee:
Tomorrow's conference every attendee must be punctual.
complimentary shuttle bus:
All the complimentary shuttle buses are free, you could take them to anywhere if you like.
participant:
Most participants from Philippines.
accommodation:
Many accommodation are provided to homeless in the town.
pursue:
I am pursuing my dream.
consume:
The delivered company consumes a large of plastic every year.
vomit:
After drinking alcohol, I vomited up all that I had eaten for dinner.
diarrhea:
I had diarrhea yesterday.
asthma:
My friend'son, who has asthma.
rip off:
That's so expensive. I'am afraid that you're getting ripped off.
gullible:
You're so gullible - don't always trust others easily!
patio:
Let's go for a walk on the patio.
My mother like spending time on the patio which is in back of my house.
2020年7月17日 02:21
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please, could you correct my mistakes in these sentences, thank you!
I've recently practiced my English grammar, please, let me know if there <s>has</s> are any mistakes.
charity:
The charity received many clothes from students.
They organized a charity activity <s>for</s> to raise money to help poor people.
attendee:
For tomorrow's conference every attendee must be punctual.
complimentary shuttle bus:
All the complimentary shuttle buses are free, you can take them to anywhere if you like.
participant:
Most participants are from the Philippines.
accommodation:
Many accommodation are provided to homeless people in the town.
pursue:
I am pursuing my dream.
consume:
The delivered company consumes a large amount of plastic every year.
vomit:
After drinking alcohol, I vomited up all that I had eaten for dinner.
diarrhea:
I had diarrhea yesterday.
asthma:
My friends son, who has asthma.
rip off:
That's so expensive. I'm afraid that you're getting ripped off.
gullible:
You're so gullible - don't always trust others easily!
patio:
Let's go for a walk on the patio.
My mother like spending time on the patio which is in back of my house.
Nice work! :)
2020年7月17日
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please, could you correct my mistakes in these sentences, thank you!
I've recently practiced my English grammar, please, let me know if there are any mistakes.
charity:
The charity received many clothes from students.
They organized a charity activity <s>for</s> to raise money to help poor people.
attendee:
Tomorrow's conference <s>every</s> attendees must be punctual.
complimentary shuttle bus:
All the <s>complimentary </s>shuttle buses are free. You can take them to anywhere if you like.
("Complimentary" and "free" are synonyms. You only need one. Both phrases had a unique noun and verb, so they are better as two sentences. The first sentence is in present tense. So the second sentence should be in present tense.)
participant:
Most participants are from Philippines.
accommodation:
Many accommodation are provided to homeless in the town.
("the homeless" or "homeless people" is correct. however advocates feel "people experiencing homelessness" is a nicer way of saying it)
pursue:
I am pursuing my dream.
consume:
The delivery company consumes <s>a </s>large amounts of plastic every year.
vomit:
After drinking alcohol, I vomited up all that I had eaten for dinner.
diarrhea:
I had diarrhea yesterday.
asthma:
My friend's son has asthma.
rip off:
That's so expensive. I'm afraid that you're getting ripped off.
gullible:
You're so gullible - don't always trust others so easily!
Your sentence is technically fine as is but sounds a bit awkward. Adding a "so" helps.
patio:
Let's go for a walk on the patio.
My mother likes spending time on the backyard patio<s> which is in back of my house</s>.
2020年7月17日
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