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Love For 100 Days (2) 1:23 pm Tina: I'm thirsty. Lets rest for a while first. Peter: Wait here while I go buy some drinks. What would you like? Tina: Eem...Apple juice will be just fine. 1:43 pm Tina waiting for about 20 minutes and Peter havent return. Then someone walked up to her. Stranger: Is your name Tina? Tina: Yes, and may I help you? Stranger: Just now down there on the street a drunk driver has crashed into a guy. I think its your friend. Tina ran over to the spot with the stranger and sees Peter lying on the floor with blood over his face and her apple juice still in his hands. The ambulance came and she went to the hospital with Peter. Tina sat outside the emergency room for five and a half hours. The doctor came out, and he sigh. 11:51 pm Doctor: I'm sorry, but we did the best we could. He is still breathing now but God would take him away from us very soon. We found this letter inside his pocket. The doctor hands over the letter to Tina and she goes into the room to see Peter. He look weak but peaceful. Tina read the letter and then she burst into tears. Here is what the letter said. Tina, Our 100 days is almost over. I had fun with you during all these days. Although you may be greedy sometimes and less thoughtful, but these all brought happiness into my life. I have realize that you are a really cute girl and blamed myself for never taken the time to knowing that. I have nothing much to ask for, but I just wish that we can extend the day. I want to be your boyfriend forever and wish that you can be beside me all the time. Tina, I love you. 11:58 Tina: (sobbing) Peter. Did you know what was the wish I made on the night there was a meteor. I asked God to let us last forever. We were suppose to last 100 days so Peter! You can't leave me! I LOVE YOU, but can you come back to me now? I love you Peter. I LOVE YOU. As the clock struck twelve, Peter's heart stopped beating. It was 100 days.

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Love For 100 Days (2)

1:23 pm
Tina: "I'm thirsty. Let's rest for a while first."
Peter: "Wait here while I go buy get some drinks from a store. What would you like Anything special?"
Tina: "Eem Er...Apple juice will be just fine."

1:43 pm
Tina waiting waited for about 20 minutes. and Still no sign of Peter. haven't return. Then someone walked up to her.
Stranger: "Is your name Tina?"
Tina: "Yes... , and May I help you?"
Stranger: "Just now down there on the street A drunk driver has crashed into a guy. I think it's your friend."

Tina ran over to the spot with the stranger. and sees Peter was lying on the floor ground; with blood over covered his face and with her apple juice still in his hands; still whispering her name. 1The ambulance came and she went to the hospital with Peter. Tina sat outside the emergency room for five and a half hours. The doctor came out, and he sighed.
11:51 pm
Doctor: "I'm sorry.  but We did the our best we could. He's is still breathing now but God would will soon take him away from us very soon. We found this letter inside his pocket."

The doctor hands over the letter to Tina and she goes into the room to see PeterWith his letter in hand, she went to see him. He looked weak but calm  peaceful. Tina began reading his  the letter and then she burst into silent tears came rolling... Here is what the letter said.

"Tina, our 100 days is are almost over. I We had great fun with you together 2 during all these days this while. Although you were very competitive and singled minded during the matches 3, may be greedy sometimes and less thoughtful, but these all your brought happiness into my life. I have realized that you are very beautiful a really cute girl and blamed myself for never not taken the time to knowing that any initiative to proceed further. I have nothing much to ask for, but I just wishing that we can extend the day can be extended. I want to be your boyfriend forever and wish that you can be beside me all the time with you forever. Tina, I love you."
11:58


Tina (sobbing): "Peter, Did you know what was remember the wish I made on the that night there was when a meteor streaked across the sky?. I asked God to let us be together last forever. We were suppose to last 100 days so Peter! At first, I thought we would part our ways when the match of a hundred days ended.  You can't leave me now! I LOVE YOU.  Please, but can you come back to me now! I love you Peter. I LOVE YOU."

As the clock struck twelve, Peter's heart stopped beating. It was 100 days.

Good style and heart jerking.

1.  Otherwise how does the stranger knew her name was Tina!

2.  Never say, "I had fun with you", especially with a girl.  In modern daily speech, it can mean I had sex with you!

3.  This is prior knowledge from the first part, otherwise I would be stumped and do not know how to correct this.

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