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You're Beautiful Recently I heard a song, "You're Beautiful" by James Blunt. The melody and the lyrics are simple. However, somehow I just like it. Listening to the song, I felt as if I was on a mountain or in a tranquil wood or in New York City. It soothed me from deep inside. There are some critics on the Internet say that it is a bad song, the melody is simple and so on. I wonder why they think so. Anyway, the beauty is in the eye of the beholder. Am I right? "You're beautiful. You're beautiful. You're beautiful. It's true..." Simple yet beautiful. Here is the link to the song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nX1VeFBo9AQ Enjoy!

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You're Beautiful

 

Recently I heard a song, "You're Beautiful" by James Blunt. The melody and the lyrics are simple. However, somehow I just like it.

Listening to the song, I felt as if I was on a mountain or in a the tranquility of a forest wood or even in the hustle and bustle of in New York City 1. It soothed me from deep within inside.

There are Some critics on the Internet say claim that it is not a bad great song, the melody is simple and so on. I wonder why they think so. Anyway, the beauty is in the eye of the beholder. Am I not right? 2

"You're beautiful. You're beautiful. You're beautiful. It's true..." Simple and yet beautiful.

Here is the link to the song:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nX1VeFBo9AQ

Enjoy!

 

1.  The Big Apple is never known for its tranquility or quietude.  It is always on the go.  Hence you need to add these adjectives.

 

2.  "Am I right?" is too blunt and confrontational.  "Am I not right" is more polite and the tone less confrontational (ie, I am right and you are wrong).  Here it means, "Am I wrong?" hence no confrontational (I am wrong and you are right but with the important question mark, it implies that you are not sure.  A nicer way of packaging the same thing).

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I like his songs always, and Shayne Ward's is nice too!
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The song is OK, but I have never felt anything soothing when I am in New York. Super writing.
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i love that song!
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I see improvement in your writing. Keep it up!

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