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Indoor activities versus Outdoor activities
There are a lot of activities to enjoy around us. We are able to divide them into two types of activities, such as indoor activities and outdoor activities. Some people like outdoor activities such as a baseball or football. Others like indoor activities such as volleyball or table tennis. In the case of indoor activities, [people can enjoy them regardless of the weather] regardless of weather, people want to play sports, they can enjoy them. However, I prefer playing outdoor activities. There are two reasons [for this] why I think so.
First, outdoor activities help people to be more healthier. For example, when people play baseball in the a huge ball park, a huge ball park it makes people move a lot and that helps people strengthen their body. And that helps people to be in good for their mental health. There's a saying " A sound in mind, a sound in body.".
Second, as people enjoy playing sports outside, they are able to reduce their stress. For example, in the case of school students, they spend most of their time studying in the classroom. If they enjoy outdoor sports, they will have a chance to breathe fresh air outside with while playing the sports. After playing the sports, they are able to refresh their mind and that makes students concentrate on studying.
Therefore, I like outdoor activities more than indoor activities. Although indoor activities also help people to be healthier and relieve their stress, the effect of outdoor activities is better than indoor activities.
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