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please check my grammar Ethiopia has Amazing Cultures. Ethiopia has three different unique cultures. First, Ethiopia has Owen traditional culture. It’s has different ceremony to make a coffee. One person making coffee and it takes two hour. Ethiopia has a custom dresses and it’s made by hand. The dresses are white color and it has different color design on it. People when they go to church or in holiday, they have to be wear it. Ethiopia foods are spacey. They eat by hand and especially all family members are eating in one big plate together. Even without invitation if someone comes in your house you have to invite them inside and the person must eat and drink. Second, Ethiopia people are very respectful people. People have to be respect older people. For example, if you are sitting on the bus or anywhere you are, when the older people comes you have to stand up and greeting them. If you know that person first down you head and kiss them in the check more than three times. Finally, Ethiopia has own alphabet. The alphabets are 126 latters and one latter has seven different sounds . The way alphabets orders are so unique and beautiful. 0 Share: Share on twitterShare on facebookShare on google_plusone_shareShare on emailMore Sharing Services Written by hope 1 day ago 0 corrections 13 views Flag 0 comments Corrections VotesNewest No corrections have been written yet. Please write a correction! More notebook entries written in English •nice to meet you (2) •A productive day (0) •This weekend's Events. (0) •plan for learning languages (0) •This weekend's Events. (0) Show More Write a notebook entry
2013年3月3日 12:43
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Ethiopia has Amazing Traditions. (Culture is language, dress, holidays, and all the things that go into day to day life. A tradition is a specific activity or holiday that is repeated over time. Traditions are part of a culture.)
Ethiopia has three different unique traditions. First, Ethiopia has Owen traditional culture. It’s has a different ceremony to make coffee. One person makes the coffee and it takes two hours. Ethiopia has traditional handmade dresses. The dresses are white in color and have different colored designs on them. When they go to church or on a holiday, people have to wear the dresses. Ethiopia foods are spicy. Ethiopian people eat by hand and all family members eat together off one big plate. If someone comes to your house, even without invitation, you have to invite them inside and offer them food and drink. Second, Ethiopian people are very respectful. Young people have to be respectful to older people. For example, if you are sitting on the bus, or anywhere else, when an  older person comes you have to stand up and greet them. If you know that person you first put your head down and kiss them on the check more than three times. Finally, Ethiopia has its own alphabet. The alphabet has 126 letters and one letter has seven different sounds . The order of the alphabet is so unique and beautiful.



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2013年11月23日

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Ethiopia has amazing cultures.
Ethiopia has three different unique cultures. First, Ethiopia has Owen [<em>your intended meaning is unclear - do you mean a particular culture such as Oromo, Amhara, Gurage? or a cooking, dancing, or other tradition?</em>] traditional culture. It’s has a unique different ceremony to make a coffee. One person makes the coffee and it takes two hours. Ethiopia has a traditional  custom dresses and it’s made by hand. The dresses are is white color and it has different color designs on it. People, when they go to church or on a in holiday, they have to be wear it. Ethiopian foods are spicy spacey. They eat by hand and especially all family members are eating from in one big plate together. Even without invitation if someone comes in your house you have to invite them inside and the person must eat and drink. Second, Ethiopian people are very respectful people. People have to be respect older people. For example, if you are sitting on the bus or anywhere you are, when the older people comes you have to stand up and greeting them. If you know that person first bow down your head and kiss them in the check more than three times. Finally, Ethiopia has its own alphabet. The alphabet has are 126 letters latters and one letter latter has seven different sounds . The way alphabets orders [<em>your meaning is unclear here</em>] are so unique and beautiful.



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2013年5月18日

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Ethiopia has Amazing Cultures.
Ethiopia has three different unique cultures. First, Ethiopia has Owen traditional culture. It’s has different ceremony to make a coffee. One person takes two hrs for making coffee and it takes two hour. Ethiopia has a customised  dresses and it’s they are made by hand. These  dresses are of white color and it has different color and design on it. People when they go to church or in on holiday, they have to be wear it. Ethiopia foods are spaicey. They eat by hand and especially all family members are eating eates in one big plate together. Even without invitation if someone comes in your house, you have to invite them him inside and the person must eat and drink. Second, Ethiopia people are very respectful people. People have to be respect older people. For example, if you are sitting on in the bus or anywhere you are, when the older people comes ,you have to stand up and greeting them. If you know that person, first down you head and kiss them in the check more than three times. Finally, Ethiopia has own alphabet. The alphabets are 126 latters and one latter has seven different sounds . The way alphabets orders are so unique and beautiful.



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2013年3月3日

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Ethiopia has Amazing Cultures.
Ethiopia has three different unique cultures. First, Ethiopia has Owen traditional culture. It’s has different ceremony to make a coffee. One person takes two hrs for making coffee and it takes two hour. Ethiopia has a customised  dresses and it’s they are made by hand. These  dresses are of white color and it has different color and design on it. People when they go to church or in on holiday, they have to be wear it. Ethiopia foods are spaicey. They eat by hand and especially all family members are eating eates in one big plate together. Even without invitation if someone comes in your house, you have to invite them him inside and the person must eat and drink. Second, Ethiopia people are very respectful people. People have to be respect older people. For example, if you are sitting on in the bus or anywhere you are, when the older people comes ,you have to stand up and greeting them. If you know that person, first down you head and kiss them in the check more than three times. Finally, Ethiopia has own alphabet. The alphabets are 126 latters and one latter has seven different sounds . The way alphabets orders are so unique and beautiful.



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2013年3月3日
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