The Count of Monte Cristo

I finished reading the Count of Monte Cristo today.  Turning the last page of the second volume, I still felt that something was missing.  What is the matter with him?  I feel that the plot didn't come to closure.  I am impressed by his revenge. 

"Happiness is like the palaces in fairy tales whose gates are guarded by dragons: we must fight in order to achieve our goal".

Sorry if I eliminated the sentences that repeated thoughts or made no sense.  The only time you should use complex tenses is to place events in their proper sequence. (Establish a chronology)

The Count of Monte Cristo

I has finished to read the Count of Monte Cristo today. Turning the last page of the second volume, he still didn't feel relief. What's the matter with him? Did he find solace in the soil of the Gaide? I think so the ending was unfinished. I am impressed by the consequences of his revenge. It was evolved from flying gliding on the mountain snow to an avalanche.

"Happiness is like those palaces in fairy tales whose gates are guarded by dragons: we must fight in order to conquer it".

PS: not sure what you were trying to say in the "avalanche" sentence (I was only guessing).