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Describe a special meal you were invited to. For me the most special of a meal is happened in my friend's new apartment.That day she invite me to her new place to have supper.after dinner ,we talked a lot and she gave me some advice,and I feel it is very helpful for me。So I think it is a special meal. We eat pasta with tomato and cheese sauce that day,of course, I cook the meal , because my friends don't know how to cook at all ! But she bought my favourite cake to make up, so I'm willing to cook a meal.After dinner,I ask her to go abroad is good or not,you know, to go abroad ro not is a very difficult choose for me.She thinks I should go abroad ,because she thinks I should brave to try.In fact I also think so,but I still not determined. In the end, I determined to go abroad.So I be here today. That day is very inportant for me to make my choose, that's the result why I believe it is a special meal for me.
2013年4月13日 09:36
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Describe a special meal you were invited to.

For me the most special of a meal was at my friend's new apartment.That day she invited me to her new place to have supper. After dinner, we talked a lot and she gave me some advice. I feel it was very helpful to me。So I think it was a special meal.
We ate pasta with tomato and cheese sauce that day.Of course, I cooked the meal, because my friends don't know how to cook at all ! But she bought my favourite cake to make up =bake? decorate?, so I was willing to cook a meal. After dinner, I asked her whether going abroad is a good idea or not. Going abroad is a dificult choice for me.She thinks I should go abroad <em>(if you say abroad again and again, it gets repetitive, so you can say "overseas")</em>, because she thinks I should be brave and try. In fact, I also thought so, but I was not yet determined/convinced.
In the end, I decided to go abroad. So I am here today. That day was very inportant to me to make my choice/decision. This is why why I believe it was a special meal for me.

 

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2013年4月13日
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