The great people around me
Brooks, he is my English english teacher. I must to say, he is amazing! He is not just like the usual teacher. He came to China china in 1994, and he put in every effort to support the children from the poor areas of China. He is quite correctly capable to be called a "philanthropist". He founded The Grace Children's Organization with his wife. He totally inspires aspired me. That's It's not easy for a person. And the most excited thing is that Meryl Streep, and other -the most influencial people - not just in the film industry but also in many fields - accepted a interview and helped to publicize the organization.
He is interested in politics in China and the world. He has a quite unique perspective of China and Chinese people. I have to say, some knowledge that I i didn't know, he knows clearly. God knows konws, I thought I've I had learned much about my country. Next Monday，I will talk politics with him。I'm really looking forward to it.
Brooks or Mr Brooks? In the US we would say Mr Brooks, maybe in the UK just Brooks.
We need a space after every punctuation (. , :)
We capitalize country names, languages, days of the week, and I.
Inspires because present tense. I had learned vs I have learned to make it past tense.
My correction is different from Nikki - oh well! - because I wanted to retain your style of writing, I like it! Good luck with your discussion with Mr Brooks! It is wonderful to meet inspirational people.
The great people around me
Brooks,he is my english teacher. I must to can say, that he is amazing. He is not just like a the usual teacher. He came to china in 1994, and he has put every effort to support the poor children in from the poor area of china. He is quite capable to can be called"philanthropist.". He and his wife founded The Grace Children's Organization with his wife. He inspires totally aspired me. It's not easy for a person. And The most excited thing is Meryl Streep-the most influencial person people not just in the film industry but also in many fields, she accepted an interview and help to publicize the org.
He is interested in Chinese and the world political politics in china and world. He has a quite unique perspective of view toward China and its chinese people. I have to say, some knowledge that i didn't know he knows clearly. God konws, I thought I've learn a lot much about my country. Next Monday，I will talk about politics with him。I'm really looking forward to it.
** I am not sure if my correction is 100% correct or not, please reply or send a message to me if there is any question or comment. :) **
Oops, should be "I must say" not "I must to say"
