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Our current situation As a brazilian citizen, I can not avoid talking about the protests that are happening around the country. After all, I love my country! Brazilian people are angry about the high expenses the government is doing for the World Cup. The stadium of Brasília, one of the biggest arenas in Brazil, cost about 1,015 billion reais( about 900 million dollars). On the other hand, many areas like education, health, public transport and security are being put aside from the preferences of the goverment. Besides that, our economy is stuck, it's not progressing at all, which makes people even more willing to protest. They don't want to mess up or destroy the harmony of the country. They want to see real changes, not only things that are used like a make-up in order to hide the corruption and illegal actions of our politicians. In fact, they want ( just like me) a peaceful, fair, solidary and connected Brazil, that can be used as an example for the others. I hope you guys understand that! Thank you so much for reading! If you could correct it, please do it. It's still a entry. Hugs!
2013年6月19日 18:54
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Our current situation

As a brazilian citizen, I can not avoid can't help talking about the protests that are happening around the country. After all, I love my country!

Brazilian people are angry about the high expenses the government is doing creating for the World Cup. The stadium of Brasília, one of the biggest arenas in Brazil, costs about 1,015 billion reais( about 900 million dollars). On the other hand, many areas like education, health, public transport and security are being put aside from the preferences interests of the goverment. Besides that, our economy is stuck, it's not progressing at all, which makes people even more willing to protest. They don't want to mess up or destroy the harmony of the country. They want to see real changes, not only things that are used like a make-up in order to hide the corruption and illegal actions of our politicians. In fact, they want ( just like me) a peaceful, fair, solidary and connected Brazil, that can be used as an example for the others.

 


I hope you guys understand that!

Thank you so much for reading! If you could correct it, please do it. It's still a entry.

Hugs!

 

Great job Alisson! There are very few mistakes in your writing. You must have a good level of English already. I also liked the topic. Maybe we'll chat sometime. I will add you on Skype :)


Alex

2013年6月23日
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