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Winter in Russia 1. Do you like winter?Winter is my favorite time of year..I think It's the best time for fun in Russia.You can skiing,skating,you can slide down from the ice hill and play in snows..Most of russian children like to play the game "King of the hill"(Царь горы).I remember how I played in this game when I was a child.The rules of the game are: One of the players climbs to a low snow hill and defiantly shouts:"I'm the king of the hill!"Other participants of fun rush to storm the hill from all sides.Each of attacking players tries to occupy it,overthrowing self-styled king of the hill.In such funny struggle players pull off each other from the snow hill.There's not permitted to use any brute force. Of course,this is not all that we do in winter time... Correct me,please..

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Winter in Russia 1.

Do you like winter?  Winter is my favorite time of the year.  I think it's the best time for fun in Russia.  You can go skiing, skating, sledding and play in the snow.  Most of Russian children like to play the game "King of the hill"(Царь горы).  I remember how I played in this game when I was a child.  The rules of the game are: 
One of the players climbs to a low (лучше - small) snow hill and defiantly shouts:  "I'm the king of the hill!"  The other participants of the game rush to storm the hill from all sides.  Each of the attacking players tries to occupy it, overthrowing the self-proclaimed king of the hill.  Then there is a fun struggle where players pull each other off the snow hill.  Brute force is not permitted.  Of course, this is not all that we do in winter time... 

Correct me, please..

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I'm not a native speaker, but I'll try to help:

Winter in Russia 1.

Do you like winter? Winter is my favorite time of the year..I think It's the best time for having fun in Russia.You can skiing, skateing, you can slide down from (the?) ice hill(s?) (I think you don't really need the whole "down the ice hill" part and just say "you can slide") and play in snows..Most of russian children like to play the game "King of the hill"(Царь горы). I remember how I played in this game when I was a child. The rules of the game are:
One of the players climbs to a low snow hill and defiantly shouts: "I'm the king of the hill!" Other participants of fun rush to storm the hill from all sides. Each of attacking players tries to occupy it, overthrowing the self-styled self-elected (or self-proclaimed) king of the hill. In such a funny struggle, players pull off each other from the snow hill. There's They're not permitted to use any brute force.
Of course, this is not all that we do in winter time...

 

I really like how you used some advanced phrases such as "defiantly shout" or "storm the hill". It isn't easy to explain a children's game in a foreign language, but you did a great job of it. Congratulations!

 

I hope a native speaker will point out some more intricate details where you can improve.

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Winter in Russia 1.

Do you like winter?Winter is my favorite time of year..I think It's the best time for fun in Russia.You can skiing,skating,you can slide down from the ice hill and play in snows..Most of russian children like to play the game "King of the hill"(Царь горы).I remember how I played in this game when I was a child.The rules of the game are:
One of the players climbs to a low snow hill and defiantly shouts:"I'm the king of the hill!"Other participants of fun rush to storm the hill from all sides.Each of attacking players tries to occupy it,overthrowing self-styled king of the hill.In such funny struggle players pull off each other from the snow hill.There's not permitted to use any brute force.
Of course,this is not all that we do in winter time...

Correct me,please..

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