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A bad experience about learning english I took an English Training Class recently, which is taught on line. I have took 2 classes, and I'm so disappointed with it, because I think I can't improve my English by taking these kind of class, In the class, I can't talk with the teacher , the most sentences I can hear are “well done”"that's good""move on", but it's not good really! What I want to learn is what's the meaning of this word, how to use this word, and when we will use it, and I want to talk about some stories, then the teacher can point out my mistake, and so on. Unfortunately, I can get nothing from this class, how can I do? I feel so bad, because I want to learn english well, but I can't find a right way to learn it....
2013年7月18日 13:25
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A bad experience about learning english

 

1) I took an English Training Class recently, which is taught on line.

这是过去的事情,所以要用过去时态: I took an English Training Class recently, which was taught on line.

 

2) I have took 2 classes

没有这个动词结构,要么是I took 2 classes,要么是I have taken 2 classes。两者的含义稍微不一样,可以参考语法书。

 

3) , and I'm so disappointed with it,

it是单数,但你上了两次课,所以用it不适合,应该用them。

 

4) because I think I can't improve my English by taking these kind of class,

these后面的名词要是复数形式,即kinds,要不可以写this kind。然后,接下来的名词也要与前面的对应,就是说,this kind of之后的名词要是单数形式,these kinds of之后的要是复数的。还有,句子写完了要用句号标志,而不用逗号。

 

5) In the class, I can't talk with the teacher ,

过去的事情要用过去时态叙述: In the class, I couldn't talk with the teacher

 

6) the most sentences I can hear are “well done”"that's good""move on", but it's not good really!

这个句子结构有问题。你想说什么?句子能听到得最多是“well done”等?“最多”是修饰“听到”,而不是修饰“句子”,英文里的道理的是一样的,应该写: The sentences I heard the most were "well done", "that's good", "move on", and so on.

还有,又犯了时态的错误。要记得,过去的事情用过去时态。

 

7) What I want to learn is what's the meaning of this word,

词语顺序有错,应该写:What I want to learn is what the meaning of this word is,

建议你参考语法书深究。

 

8) how to use this word, and when we will use it,

用will是典型的中式英语错误。“会”有时候可以翻页成“will”,但并不是所有的“会”都可以用“will”表达。“will”只能用来表达将来时态,但你的原句是想表达一般情况,虽然中文里可以用“会”,但英文里用“will”不恰当。最好写:and when we should use it

 

9) and I want to talk about some stories, then the teacher can point out my mistake, and so on.

独立的句子应该用句号分开,不能想中文一样地用逗号连起一系列的独立的句子,即:I want to talk about some stories. Then the teacher can point out my mistakes, and so on.

还有,要注意,形容一般情况的时候,要用复数形式,就是mistake应该改为mistakes,因为除非你知道仅有一个错误,否则应该用不定量的复数形式。

 

10) Unfortunately, I can get nothing from this class,

错误有几个,首先应该用过去时态,其次虽然I can get nothing不算错,但不地道,应该改成I can't get anything(时态暂时没改),最后,你上了两次课,应该用复数形式,即classes。应该写: Unfortunately I couldn't get anything from these classes.

 

11) how can I do?

没有这个说法。What can I do?

 

12) I feel so bad, because I want to learn english well, but I can't find a right way to learn it....

好吧,这句过得去。

2013年7月19日
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A bad experience about learning English online

I took an online English Training Class recently, which with is taught on line. I have took taken 2 classes, and I'm so very disappointed with it, because I think I can't improve my English by taking these this kind of class. In the class, I can't talk with the teacher, the most sentences I can hear most often are “well done” "that's good" "move on", but it's not good really! What I want to learn is about what's the meaning of this word, how to use this word, and when we will use it, and I want to talk about some stories, then so that the teacher can point out my mistakes, and so on. Unfortunately, I can get nothing from this class, so what how can I do? I feel so bad, because I want to learn English well, but I can't find {a right good way/the right way} to learn it....

2013年7月19日
Hai, "LET ME TRY TEACHING YOU HOW TO SPEAK INSTEAD OF WHAT TO SPEAK". Hope if you are in a real & serious search of a right English language practicing partner, Here's to share my time with type or voice chat through skype only. I come forward to help you & meet me at [email protected]
2013年7月19日
I am sorry. I too have tried different methods that weren't for me. I don't know what you can access and what has Chinese to English, but I have been having good luck with Duolingo.com and Memrise.com. Also the free version of languagepod101.com are pretty good to listen. Then when you are confident, SPEAK as much as you can with native speakers as that is where you will REALLY learn! Good luck!
2013年7月19日
It can not refund? In which website, just communicate with them, maybe you can cancel this class.
2013年7月19日
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