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a loneliness Sometimes there comes a point in your life, when you look at friends, work, all your life and you pursue an irresistible desire to disappear, turn off the phone, go to a place where nobody knows who are you.It will not make you happy but you will remember who you are

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You put yourself into wrong enviroment... :-)
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Always think the same thing.
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I hope that you will always know who you are and that loneliness will not be a companion of yours. It is okay to turn away from the technologies which become as chains on our ankles, but never say no to life.
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Loneliness

Sometimes there comes a point in your life, when you look at friends, work, and your entire life, and you pursue an irresistible desire to disappear, turn off the phone, and go to a place where nobody knows who are you. It will not make you happy, but you will remember who you are.


"all your life" is correct.  I just wanted to tell you another more common way of expressing the same thought:  "your entire life" 

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