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Students shouldn't pay the full cost of their own university studies Nowadays, there have a lot of students have problem about money when they intent to enter their universities. They have to leave their dream to enter the university or have to work hard to get money for studying. So that, if the state can provide students to have free higher education, it can help them to perform their dream by entering the university and create their bright furture career. I personally don't think that student should pay the full cost of their own university studies rather than have free higher education provided by the state. My first reason is about family issue. Many students that coming from poor families which their parents can not pay enough money for them to study in the university. So even they studied very well in the past, but because of this reason, they have to find some jobs that don't need study anymore to earn money. Almost of them will be poor people like their parents in the furture. My second reason is social issue. When students have chance to study in the university, knowledge and quality of working people will be improved. The state will be developping more and more. So it means that the state should have free higher education rather than let students pay the full cost of their own university studies.

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Students shouldn't pay the full cost of their own university studies

Nowadays, there are a lot of students having problems with money when they think about going to college. They have to give up their dream to go to college or have to work hard to get money to pay for their studies. So therefore, if the state can provide students to have free higher education, it can help them to live out their dream by going to college and creating their bright furture career. I personally don't think that students should pay the full cost of their own university studies rather than have free higher education provided by the state.

My first reason is about family issues. Many students that come from poor families, which their parents can not pay enough money for their education. So even though they studied very well in the past, but because of this reason, they have to find some jobs in which don't need study anymore to earn money. Almost of them will be poor people like their parents in the furture.

My second reason is social issues. When students have the chance to study in the university, the knowledge and quality of working people will be improved. The nation will grow more and more.

So therefore the state should have free higher education rather than make students pay the full cost of their own university studies.

 

Bon travail ! Ce n'est pas le cas aux États-Unis, mais peut-être en France ?

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dear all, please help to review and correct my above essay. Thank you very much/ yan

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