Nicole
Have a good life Why some people always feel angry?why some people feel unhappy when they talk to eath other ? I think we should be keep a good thinking in the life.we are different between others.we should control ourself .when we heard some words ,we can thinking about them use other way .maybe you can found something differents.
2014年11月26日 08:07
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Have a good life <-(In this context you probably mean 'Improve your life'?) 

Why do some people always feel angry? why do some people feel unhappy when they talk to eatheach other ?
I think we should be keep a good thinking more positively in the life. weWe are different betweenfrom others. weWe should control ourselfourselves . whenWhen we heardhear some words, we canshould thinking about them usein other ways. maybeMaybe you can foundfind something differents.

 

Nice! I only corrected your gramatical mistakes as its a subjective topic where I do not want to assume that what I think you wrote is what I think you mean. For example "When we hear some words we should think about them in other ways. Maybe you can find something different", this sentences on their own do not really make sense, but in this context what I think from this sentance is that there are many people in the world with different upbringings and experiences and that depending upon their circumstances they may say or have opinions that do not match with your own, but by understanding this it is possible to mutually agree on each others' existence as "good people" and not resort to violence or anger and try to resolve disputes with understanding and discussion.

2014年11月26日
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Have a good life

Why some people always feel angry?Why some people feel unhappy when they talk to eath each other ?
I think we should be keep a good thinking in the life. We are different between others.we should control ourself ourselves.When we heard some words ,we can thinking about them use others' way .Maybe you can found something differents. differences.

2014年11月26日
Maybe they have reason. Exp: work, relationship etc. Actually you're absolutely right.
2014年11月26日
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