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Power of love
Recently I lerned from the book of Dr. Gerald Jampolsky that in Africa lives one tribe - the Babemba - which whose members are very unusually train those of them, who made a bad act have an unusual punishment for people who commit a bad act. The people become round surround the guilty person and everyone starts to telling him about his the best acts that he did in his life, which he made for a life, and also about all the good qualities of his character. They speak about good things only and do it sincerely and with love. This action can proceed last for many hours in a row, until everyone tells has told a good story about this person. After that the person comes back to a the tribe the renovate reformed, and he doesn't already want to do bad things for a long time. So the power of love wins.
I think, it's this is the unattainable ideal for the civilized people.
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Hope you find these edits helpful. I chose the word reformed instead of renovated, I think renovate is archaic (old fashioned) unless you are talking about houses; reform is used specifically to describe people who were criminals and no longer are.
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