Ekaterina
My apartment I live in a small apartment in the Moscow. There are four rooms: a big living room, a small bedroom, a great kitchen and a bathroom with a bath. In the bedroom, there are two single bed, two pictures, one big mirror, a cupboard and a small tv. The living room is very nice. There's a sofa, a cabinet, a desk and a big tv. I have a small kitchen, but there's a table, two chairs and an old furniture.
2014年12月20日 14:22
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My apartment

I live in a small apartment in Moscow. There are four rooms: a big living room, a small bedroom, a great kitchen and a bathroom with a bath. In the bedroom, there are two single beds, two pictures, one big mirror, a cupboard and a small tv. The living room is very nice. There's a sofa, a cabinet, a desk and a big tv. I have a small kitchen, but there's a table, two chairs and some old furniture.

 

Only a few mistakes< Unlike Russian, English has articles. 

2014年12月20日

My apartment

I live in a small apartment in the Moscow region. There are four rooms: a big living room, a small bedroom, a great kitchen and a bathroom with a bath. In the bedroom, there are two single beds, two pictures, one big mirror, a cupboard and a small TV. The living room is very nice. There's a sofa, a cabinet, a desk and a big TV. I have a small kitchen, but there's a table, two chairs and an old furniture.

 

These are some variations, Ekaterina:

"I live in a small apartment in the centre of Moscow."

"I live in a small apartment in Moscow."

TV is shortened from "Television" and should be in capitals.

".. two chairs and some old furniture." or ".. two chairs and an old dresser."

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2014年12月20日

My apartment

I live in a small apartment in the Moscow. There are four rooms: a big living room, a small bedroom, a large/big/spacious kitchen and a bathroom with a bath. In the bedroom, there are two single bed, two pictures, one big mirror, a cupboard and a small TV. The living room is very nice. There's a sofa, a cabinet, a desk and a big TV. I have a small kitchen, but there's a table, two chairs and an old furniture.

Furniture is uncountable. You can refer to one or more pieces/items of furniture.

For example in your sentence:an old piece of furniture - if it is one item.

Or - The furniture in my kitchen is very old. Here I mean all the furniture - table, chairs, everyting.

 

2014年12月20日

My Apartment

I live in a small apartment in the Moscow. There are four rooms, a big living room, a small bedroom, a great kitchen and a bathroom with a bath. In the bedroom, there are two single beds, two pictures on the wall, one big mirror, a cupboard and a small TV. The living room is very nice. There's a sofa, a cabinet, a desk and a big TV. I have a small kitchen, but there's a table, two chairs and an old piece of furniture.

2014年12月20日
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