Oh my gosh! 

Why does this year cast so hot?! In Japan, there is a music festival called Summer Sonic and it is held every year. I have been to this festival twice. Last year, the casts were not interesting for to me, so I didnt go. I went two and three years ago, and this summer , I will be very busy , so I will not be able to go to this time. Recently , its casts were announced. When i saw that the casts, I got reglet to see. Because the casts are macklemore& Iyan Ruis , Pharell Williams, Imagin Dragons, Magic , and so on. Oh, oh, oh! It is so hot! Why does it have to be hot this year? I want to listen to Thrift shop on live. Haaaaaaaaaaaa

Make sure captial words are captialized. ^_^ For the most part, you did a very good job! Keep practicing!