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Long Time No See I’d been too busy preparing my final exams to write an essay for last two weeks. It’s really a long time for me. If brain is a machine, I guess the English part of mine has become rusty and is not functioning well as it used to be. And I know where I can turn for help and help the others. That’s why I come here to ask for the best and free lubrication! Have a nice day, folks!
2011年1月19日 06:54
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Long Time No See

I’d been too busy preparing for my final exams to write an essay during the past two weeks. That's a really a long time for me.  If my brain is a machine, I guess the English part of mine has become rusty and isn't functioning well as it used to be. <strike>And </strike>I know where I can turn for help and help <strike>the </strike>others. That’s why I've come here to ask for the best <strike>and</strike> free lubrication!

Have a nice day, folks!


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2011年1月23日
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