Life in Guadalajara, Jalisco

Life in Guadalajara is good.  well, Although, it may depends on what part of the city you're in and in what kind of ambient you move atmosphere/environment you spend your time. Here in GDL you can go to a very beautiful avenue called: Chapultepec, which is full of restaurants, bars, libraris bookstores and night clubs. Also we have a very beautiful mall called Andares, which is the most beautiful in the city. We have a zoo and an amusement park next to it. Normally, weather in GDL is very nice, thought, in summer it is a little hot but nothing that a mortal can't bear. To conclude, if you want to live in a big city here in Mexico, Guadalajara is a better option than Mexico, D.F. because it has less traffic and less air pollution. Another good option would be Monterrey or Puebla...

A few notes. I hope these are helpful:

Good job and very nice comments about "la perla tapatía".  Extraño mucho la ciudad. :-)

Cities, states, countries, etc., are capitalized in English and we generally separate them with commas.

Since you're presenting some ideas to contrast it being "good", it helps to start your next sentence with "although".

In English:  Depend "on" (Spanish - depende de), I know it gets confusing with all those prepositions and which one is correct (in, on, at, to, from, etc.). :-)

I had to make a couple of assumptions without trying to change your "style" and what you were trying to say.  Ambient is a word in English, but I believe you were looking for "atmosphere" or "environment". (aunque en español, para mí "ambiente" suena muy bien en este sentido) :-)

People not from Guadalajara might not know what GDL (the three-letter code used for the airport) stands for.  So, in the future, you might want to spell out the name of the city.

Bookstores = librerías in Spanish (and not to be confused with biblioteca, library)  I know, another tricky one to have to keep clear.

And yes, Andares is the most beautiful mall in the city. Totalmente de acuerdo.

An amusement park - An before words that commence with a vowel sound.

Weather expressions need the word "it" ...it is a little hot...

Muy buen trabajo. Guadalajara es una ciudad hermosa, divertida e histórica. Gracias por compartir un poco sobre "la perla tapatía".  Saludos!