Some people think living in big cities is bad for people's health In the present age increasing number of people are prefer to live in big cities, which is a common phenomenon around the world. Yet at

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Some people think living in big cities is bad for people's health In the present age increasing number of people are prefer to live in big cities, which is a common phenomenon around the world. Yet at the same time, whether it is bad to human-being’s health has triggered a controversial issue. In this essay, I will analyse both sides in the following texts. Admittedly, it is the fact that there are some advantages that benefiting our health when living in the big city. To start with, people nowadays are not only use jogging and walking as exercise means, but starting use professional facilities to get efficiently healthier. The fitness center, which provides the equipment to the exercisers, are anywhere in the city. So that people can access a healthier life manner. Also, there is no doubt about it: Medical care schemes and services are much more advanced than in the rural regions, for the government are usually spend higher budgets to the develop or the high-density city, thus better treatment can be found in the area. On the other hand, however, air pollution is a serious problem that hazarding humen’s health. In every year, many of victims died in some fatal diseases like cancer or tuberculosis, cancer , is cause by suffering in a long term bad quality air environment in city, a recent health survey shows.Besides, more and more evidences poof that noise is link to human’s health and the people who living in cities is more likely to be surrounding by a noisy environment because of its tremendous populations. Some people are irritable and cannot concentrated in a noisy area. Thus, noise can damage humen’s sense of hearing and mental health. Moreover, the higher cost of living for those who living in big cities cannot be overlook and it brings a great deal of pressure to them.. Thus, they have no choice but be forced the fast speed of city life: do not have enough sleeping time, eating fast food most of time, have to work till mid-night, are the major elements that harmful our health. In conclusion, regarding the views above, I firmly believe that the drawbacks slightly outweigh the advantages. Though the great conveniences the big city it has, but should we consider our health first when chose where to live?

2015年4月13日 16:17

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Some people think living in big cities is bad for people's health

In the present age an increasing number of people are prefer to live in big cities, which is a common phenomenon around the world. Yet At the same time, whether or not living in big cities is bad to human health has triggered a controversial issue. In this essay, I will analyse both sides in the following text.

Admittedly, it is the fact that there are some health advantages when living in a big city. To start with, people nowadays are not only use jogging and walking as exercise means, but they have started to use professional facilities to get efficiently healthier. These fitness centers, which provide the equipment to the exercisers, are everywhere in the city so that people can achieve a healthier lifestyle. Also, There is no doubt about it: medical care plans and services are much more advanced than in the rural regions, for the government are usually spends more money to the develop a high-density city, thus better treatment can be found in the area.

On the other hand, however, air pollution is a serious problem that is hazardous to human health. In Every year, many of victims die from some fatal diseases like cancer or tuberculosis. Cancer is caused by suffering in a long term in a bad air quality environment in city, a recent health survey shows. Besides, more and more evidence proves that noise is linked to poor human health and the people who live in cities are more likely to be surrounded by a noisy environment because of its tremendous population. Some people are irritable and cannot concentrated in a noisy area. Thus, noise can damage human sense of hearing and mental health. Moreover, the higher cost of living for those who live in big cities cannot be overlooked and it brings a great deal of pressure to them.. They have no choice but to face the fast speed of city life: do not have enough sleep, eating fast food most of time, and having to work till mid-night are the major elements that are harmful to our health.

In conclusion, regarding the views above, I firmly believe that the drawbacks slightly outweigh the advantages. Living in a big city is convinient, but should we consider our health first when we choose where to live?

Very nice work! I enjoyed reading this.

2015年4月13日

好长哈哈????

2015年5月10日

A little long for an IELTS answer ... and too long for a notebook entry because of italki limits; if you timed your writing I am sure it took more than 35-40 minutes

2015年4月13日

もっと早く上達したいですか？

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