Kiki
Informal essay Hi, everyone, nice to meet you! Firstly, I will introduce myself, my name is kiki, I’m 22 years old. I want to improve my English and make friends with you through the italki. I know that my grammar exists the mistake, but failure is the mother of success, I believe that I can speak fluently English in the future. You can contact me if you want to exchange the language, I will teach you to learn mandarin. Look forward to you!
2015年5月6日 15:10
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Informal essay

Hi, everyone, nice to meet you!
Firstly, I will introduce myself, my name is Kiki, I’m 22 years old. I want to improve my English and make friends with you through (the) italki. I know that my grammar includes mistakes (exists the mistake,) but failure is the mother of success, I believe that I can speak English fluently (English) in the future. You can contact me if you want a language exchange, (to exchange the language,) I will teach you (to learn) mandarin.
Look forward to hearing from you!

 

Good start. Not too many grammar errors. Well written.

2015年5月6日
why don't you get help from the teacher on the italki
2015年5月6日
もっと早く上達したいですか?
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