Diary I just want to write a diary to practice verbs . . Today was a tough day for me. I walked so much under the sun(appossed to sun) in the morning which in summer it’s so severe. We went to

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Diary I just want to write a diary to practice verbs . . Today was a tough day for me. I walked so much under the sun(appossed to sun) in the morning which in summer it’s so severe. We went to an ancient district of Tehran with the group for photography. Because of the Regional context that was lineral we had to walked a long way to take photo from all places of there. That place is a nice place because it have a different context with the city and you don’t feel it is the city you are live in. there are so many colorful shops with different people that have speciall personalities and all these things can be a good subjet for photography. But the point is that you need creativity to become a speciall photographer. All these beauty exist, but not everyone can capture it in a creative and special way to have influence on the viewers. When it come to taking picture; first of all you need to learn how to look and after that how to capture. Thinking in this way is good because help me to try reach better shots but my problem is I always say(tell myself) or( think by myself): well, this place can’t give me a good shot so I ignore it, but I know I will lose good opportunities. Maybe it could help me if I tell myself whatever happened; I have to take 50 photos from here for example( what els can i say instead of for example)

2015年7月27日 20:43

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Diary

I just want to write a diary to practice verbs
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Today was a tough day for me. I walked so much under the sun(appossed to sun??) in the morning which in summer it’s is so severe.
We went to an ancient district of Tehran with the group for photography. Because of the Regional context that was lineral (?? I don't understand this) we had to walked a long way to take photos from of all places of there.
That place is It was a nice place because it have has a different context atmosphere with than the city and you don’t feel it is the city you are live in. There are so many colorful shops with different people that have speciall special personalities and all these things can be a good subject for photography.
But the point is that you need creativity to become a speciall special photographer. All these this beauty exists, but not everyone can capture it in a creative and special way to have that has influence on the viewers. When it comes to taking pictures; first of all you need to learn how to look and after that how to capture.
Thinking in this way is good because it helps me to try reach better shots, but my problem is I always say(tell myself) or( think by to myself): well, this place can’t give me a good shot so I ignore it, but I know I will lose good opportunities.
Maybe it could help me if I tell myself that whatever happens, I have to take 50 photos from here. for example( what els can i say instead of for example) (you can just omit it here!)

Love it! Photography's great :)

2015年8月10日

Thank you so much Saba....It's great. I really prefer this kind of correction , to change the writing in a more fluent way :)

2015年8月11日

I would write it like this: I had a tough day today. I had to walk a lot in this summer heat because I and a group of photographers went to an ancient district of Tehran to take photos of that region. After all, we visited a beautiful neighborhood with lots of colorful shops and people with great personalities which is perfect for photography. however, you need to be creative to capture a significant photo so it would have influence on the viewers. In my opinion, There is so much beauty in this world but not everyone can see it. When it comes to photography you need to learn to see first and then how to capture. { (or) and then learn the techniques.} My problem is, When I want to take pictures I always take a glance at a certain place or a thing and tell myself that won’t make a good photo. I know that if i keep this up I'll miss the opportunity to take a lot of great photos.

2015年8月8日

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