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writing task 2 16/9/15 Being a celebrity- such as a movie star or professional athlete- brings problems as a well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings has more benefits or drawbacks? Famous people like film actors and actresses or elite sportsman and sportswomen, suffer from worries as they have privileges because of their position. In my opinion the advantages of being a welll known fellow, such as greater income and being admired, outnimber the disadvantages. In this essay will be reviewed why I think being a celebrity brings more money and support, and will be made a conclussion. First must be highlighted that notorious persons eran more money, which alllow hem to live with better comfort. For instance evry Real Madrid player lives in a house with six or more rooms, according to the sports newspaper Marca. However to be so wealthy could make these people incapable of giving cash its real value, spending money unnecessarily in stupid things. Moreover media and sport stars feel themselves how is to have a lot of supporters and fans. That is to say they can count on many people that will followthem in the good and bad times. For example tenis player Nadla stated recently in a TV interview that when he lost a match his inconditioanl fans always cheered him up with social media messages. Sometimes, however, the same persons who admire a celebrity can change to hate him or her very fast, so famous peoplecan't realy in being suppperted by therir followers all life. In conclussion the positive issues of being a notorious persons, like bigger salaries and admiration from masses, compensate the drawbacks.
2015年9月16日 18:26
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writing task 2 16/9/15

Being a celebrity- such as a movie star or professional athlete- brings problems as a well as benefits.

Do you think that being a celebrity brings has more benefits or drawbacks?

Famous people like film actors and actresses or elite sportsmen and sportswomen,  have worries too even though they have ( more )privileges because of their social status.

In my opinion, the advantages of being a well known person, such as having a greater income and  public admiration, outnumber the disadvantages. In this essay , I will reveal why I think being a celebrity is better than not being one  and how I come to a conclusion.

Firstly, it must be highlighted that  famous people earn more money(than us) that allow them to live with better comfort. For instance, every Real Madrid player lives in a house with six or more rooms, according to the sports newspaper,Marca. However to be so wealthy can make these people incapable of valuing money, leading to them spending money unnecessarily on stupid things.

Moreover, media and sport stars know how it feels like to have  a lot of supporters and fans , and they can count on them in good or bad times. For example, tennis player Nadla stated recently in a TV interview that whenever he lost a match, his faithfull fans would always cheered him up with social media messages. Sometimes, however,  the admiration of some of these people for a celebrity can quickly change to dislike of him or her , so famous people dont expect them to be their supporters forever.
In conclusion. the benefits like bigger salaries and admiration from masses more than compensate for the drawbacks.

2015年9月16日
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