The most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns ? <This is my short essay written at school. Can you plz read and check it for me ? Tks > Money can not buy happiness but it can buy things which make you happy. So especially in a job, I think the most important aspect is the money a person earns. It can be denied that most people work in order to meet their need. Should you have no money, you can not afford your settlement, clothes, food and entertainment. The money you earn not only makes you live in comfort but it also supports your family. For example, your old parents' healthy cares and your little children's education, both need much money. What can you do if you are unable to pay for them ? Moreover, how much you get from your job shows how productively you have worked. The more effective and harder you are, the more you earn. Similarly, able employees deserve better paid than unable ones. As a result, everyone will try best to work to get higher salary. However, besides money, there are many other factors making a job worthwhile such as the experience you get, the professional condition for you to improve your skills and above all, the passion of doing what you love. That's why many volunteer social worker still devote without any profit. All in all, I think money is not the only but the most important aspect of a job. Thanks for reading :))