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Double Toy Poodles❤ Hello. I met big size toy poodle. His name is "Moko-chan" (Moko mean is fluffy.) He looks like the King. King body is big and skinny than other toy poodle. He is often told He look like deer. They are so cute and fluffy. They are same size, same color. Today was a good day for me. Thank you for reading★ If you find a mistake in my notebook, could you correct it?❤ Thank you~

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Double Toy Poodles❤

Hello.
Today/tonight I met a big size toy poodle.
His name was "Moko-chan" (Moko means fluffy.)
He looked a lot like King, but King's body was bigger and skinnier than the other toy poodle.
He is often told that He looks like a deer.

They were so cute and fluffy.
They were the same size and color.

Today was a really good day.

Thank you for reading★
If you find a mistake in my notebook, could you correct it?❤

Thank you~

 

The first sentence you wrote was in past tense, therefore the rest of if should also be in the past tense :)

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Double Toy Poodles❤

Hello.


I met saw a big size toy poodle.
His name is "Moko-chan" (Moko mean is fluffy.)
He looks like the a King.
King's body is big (big how? ex: long, or tall; because it can't mean fat since the next adjective you have is skinny ^_^) and skinny  than other toy poodle.
He is often told he looks like a deer.

They are so cute and fluffy.
They are of the same size, same and color.

Today was a good day for me.

Thank you for reading.
If you find a mistake in my notebook, could you correct it?❤

Thank you~

 

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Well done. (^-^)/

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Sure! I'm happy to help you learn English. :)
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Sjatz✩ No no no no~!!!!!! I'm glad your corrections!!!!!! Thank you so much Sjatz~! If you can, could you correct in my notebook?(*'ω`*) Thank you for your comment.
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ダラたん✩ ありがとうっっ(*'ω`*) ほんとにフワフワだよ~! テディベアみたいだよ~❤

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