Elle's notebook entry: Mar 17, 2011

I am young, I can wait. My dream must be come ture. I believe I can. (or "I believe it will" since you are refering to your dream).

Good job. You need to pay attention to spacing around punctuations. No spacing before and one after :-)

cheers

Elle's notebook entry: Mar 17, 2011

I am young,I can wait.My dream must be come true.I believe I can .

Elle's notebook entry: Mar 17, 2011

I am young,I can wait.My dream must be come trueI believe I can .

Elle's notebook entry: Mar 17, 2011

I am young,I can wait. My dream must  come true.I believe I can .