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I got up today very happy.
The reason for my happiness is that yesterday many people yesterday helped me solve the doubts resolve some questions about some themes subjects.Also because it's Friday. When I wake up very happy, I listen to the music of my beautiful Colombia, in special especially Vallenato but also forever I always listen to Silvestre Dangond. I like all his songs.
Have a very nice day :)
Ah, Colombia - La Tierra de Olvido!
I got up today very happy.
The reason for my happiness is that yesterday many people helped me resolve some questions about subjects.
Also because it's Friday. When I wake up very happy I listen to the music of my beautiful Colombia, specially Vallenato but also I always listen to Silvestre Dangond. I like all his songs.
Have a very nice day :)
I got woke up today very happy (or a little more natural, "I woke up very happy today").
The reason for my happiness that I am happy is that yesterday many people yesterday helped me solve answer the questions that I had the doubts about some themes subjects. (1)(2) Also, I'm happy because it's Friday. When I wake up very happy, I listen to the music of my beautiful Colombia, in special especially Vallenato, but forever I also always listen to Silvestre Dangond. I like all his songs.
Have a very nice day :)
(1) You could just say, "...answer the questions that I had." or if you wanted to be more specific, "...answer the questions that I had about _______." And you would say specifically what you questions were about.
(2) I think I corrected what you were trying to say in the , but if you were saying that you only listen to the music of Colombia because it is Friday, then you would say, "On Fridays, when I wake up very happy, I listen to the music of my beautiful Colombia...", but I think you were trying to say you were also happy because it is Friday.
Great job! These mistakes were all style and usage and not grammar errors!
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