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My night in the beach Last week I went to the beach with my parents and my dog to spend the night there. We arrived in the afternoon, maybe 4:00pm we wanted to see the sunset and sleep close to the coast. It was really hot and we slept like 5 hours. We put a couple of sheets on the sand and some pillows and that's it. At 3am it was so cold that I had to use my dog's blanket (btw that blanket used to be mine but she took it from me the first week I got it, so it was enough for both of us). We woke up at 5:30am because we wanted to see the sunrise and when that happened the hot started again. We went to take a shower and drove back to home. We wanted to stay all day but it was impossible with that hot. You can't be comfortable any time. Besides, in the morning, there was something green in the water and it had bubbles. It was so gross. Some parents took their children into the water. I couldn't believe that. How can they do that? Don't they see it's green? It's so sad the ocean it's not the same as it used to be. The good thing is that we spent that time together. We did it because we are pretty sure those were the only 2 days we could be together. My day off is Tuesdays, my mom's Saturdays and my Dad's Sundays. I'm happy we could do it. I will always remeber that. And I didn't burn my skin with the sun (I don't like to go out with sun). I prefer winter because you just need a jacket and some boots to be ok but in summer there's no way to feel comfortable. I feel that way in this country that it's not that extreme. I think the most extreme temperature in winter here it's like 10ºC and I think it doesn't happen every year. Maybe 14ºC or 15ºC where I live.

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My night in the beach

Last week I went to the beach with my parents and my dog to spend the night there. We arrived in the afternoon, maybe 4:00pm we wanted to see the sunset and sleep close to the coast. It was really hot and we slept like 5 hours. We put a couple of sheets on the sand and some pillows and that's it.
At 3 a.m it was so cold that I had to use my dog's blanket (btw that blanket used to be mine but she took it from me the first week I got it, so it was enough for both of us). We woke up at 5:30 a.m because we wanted to see the sunrise. When that happened, It was hot again. We went to take a shower and drove back to home. We wanted to stay all day but it was impossible with that hot. You can't be comfortable any time. Besides, in the morning, there was something green in the water and it had bubbles. It was so gross. Some parents took their children into the water (took their children from the water or brought their children into/to the water). I couldn't believe that. How can they do that? Don't they see it's green? It's so sad that the ocean it's is not the same as it used to be.
The good thing is that we spent that time together. We did it because we are pretty sure those were the only 2 days we could be together. My day off is Tuesdays, my mom's Saturdays and my Dad's Sundays. I'm happy we could do it. I will always remeber that day. And I didn't burn my skin with the sun (I don't like to go out with sun). I prefer winter because you just need a jacket and some boots to be ok but in summer there's no way to feel comfortable. I feel that way in this country that it's not that extreme. I think the most extreme highest temperature in winter here it's is like 10ºC, and I think it doesn't happen every year. Maybe 14ºC or 15ºC where I live.
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My night in the beach

Last week I went to the beach with my parents and my dog to spend the night there. We arrived in the afternoon, maybe 4:00pm. we We wanted to see the sunset and sleep close to the coast. It was really hot and we slept for like 5 hours (like is quite informal, which is fine if that's what you want to do). We put a couple of sheets and some pillows on the sand and some pillows and that's it.
At 3am it was so cold that I had to use my dog's blanket (btw that blanket used to be mine but she took it from me the first week I got it, so it was enough for both of us). We woke up at 5:30am because we wanted to see the sunrise and when that happened it started to get the hot started again. We went to take a shower and drove back to home. We wanted to stay all day but it was impossible with that hot the heat. You can't be comfortable any time at all. Besides, in the morning, there was something green in the water and it had bubbles. It was so gross. Some parents took their children into the water. I couldn't believe that. How can they do that? Don't they see it's green? It's so sad the ocean it's is not the same as it used to be.
The good thing is that we spent that time together. We did it because we are pretty sure those were the only 2 days we could be together. My day off is Tuesdays, my mom's Saturdays and my Dad's Sundays. I'm happy we could do it. I will always remeber remember that. And I didn't burn my skin with the sun (I don't like to go out with sun). I prefer winter because you just need a jacket and some boots to be ok but in summer there's no way to feel comfortable. I feel that way in this country that it's not that extreme. I think the most extreme temperature in winter here it's is like 10ºC and I think it doesn't happen every year. Maybe 14ºC or 15ºC where I live.


Very good post :) The corrections I made are very minor and I understood everything you wanted to say. Good work :)

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