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victims of terrorism(2) It is vital to strengthen their voices. Their suffering, their fear and their wrenching pain should be understand over the world. The XX set up a new support portal where victims can be assisted to find the way to express their painfulness. Nobody should be forgotten. As a matter of fact, we need to reinforce present legislation. We can draw upon national policies practices and procedures besides we should built appropriate mechanism on national field in regard of medical, psychological and legal services. In addition, the justice has to give a suitable support for more confidentiality, protection and reparation.

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Victims of Terrorism(2)

It is vital to strengthen their voices. Their suffering, their fear and their wrenching pain {or "agony"} should be understood all over the world. The XX set up a new support portal where victims can be assisted to in finding the a way to express their painfulness {or "grief"}. Nobody should be forgotten.

As a matter of fact, we need to reinforce present current* legislation. We can draw upon national policies, practices and procedures. Besides, {better: "Moreover"} we should build appropriate mechanisms on a national field level in with regards to of medical, psychological and legal services. In addition, the justice system has to give a {better: "provide"} suitable support for more confidentiality, protection and reparation.


*This is a common mistake, even among Anglophones. "Present" in this context actually means "soon".

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