Saturday night

I had been an interesting time last night. Let me describe it to show you. , how did look like.
It started at 5:00 pm when my friend and me I looked around to find something to eat. Finally, we chose a small shop selling on the street is called " hủ tiếu mực" one of my favourite foods. It was very delicous, and I enjoyed it. so I ate very palatable. Then we went to  got in an ice cream  parlour restaurant. I like ice cream very much, especially strawberry ice cream, and green tea ice cream. We ate and talked a lot about everything from fashion, movies, jobs to and even love. hihi. It was funny. She is an outgoing person so we shared a lot with each other. It made me feel better after working hard all week. After that, we went to an entertainment mall to play bowling and  play games. I thought that it was awesome. Actually, it was the first time I have been played bowling but I did really well. I like speed, so I chose a racing car to play the next game. But I am not a good racer and the result was I failed. I only  scored once. had just caught goal one time only. It was enough for me.

Saturday night

Very well written!

Saturday night

Your writing is very good, Nhung, because your meaning is always clear, but I hope these notes will help explain some of my corrections...
"a" becomes "an" if the next word starts with a vowel.
"Palatable" is a good adjective to describe food, but it cannot be used to describe the way you eat food. "Heartily" is an example of a word you can use to describe how you ate food that you found palatable.
It is best to put "and" before the last item in a list, even if there are only two items in the list, such as your list of favourite ice creams.
Movies and jobs should be plural unless it is clear that you are talking about a particular movie and a particular job, e.g. "...everything from fashion to the last movie we saw, her job in the office, and even love."
"hihi" is acceptable in a text conversation, but normally a native English speaker will use "hehe" or "haha". In this case you should leave it out because you are telling a story in writing, rather than chatting.