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Next week I've my B1 exam and I'd like to practise the wrinting. If someone could CORRECT! me this I'd be so grateful. Dear friend, I have just got back from a really wonderful holiday in Venice. It was the first time I've been there and now I can say that I´m in love with the city. I think it's different about the rest of them. The most special were there´s no cars. You can walk around without take care of anything. I also really like the San MArco Square. It's so impresive. I know that you've always wanted to travel to Venice and I can assure you that if you went you would never forget it. Sorry, I forget the most important of all of the place, the food. If you like pasta, it would be your paradise. I hope I see you soon. Love, Clara.

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Next week I've my B1 exam and I'd like to practise the wrinting. If someone could CORRECT! me this

I'd be so grateful.

Dear friend,

I have just got back from a really wonderful holiday in Venice. It was the first time I've been there and now I can say that I´m in love with the city.
I think it's different about from the rest of them. The most special was were there´s are no cars. You can walk around without a care. take care of anything.
I also really like the San MArco Square. It's so impressive.
I know that you've always wanted to travel to Venice and I can assure you that if you went you would never forget it.
Sorry, I forgot the most important of all of the place, the food! If you like pasta, it would be your paradise.

I hope I see you soon.
Love, Clara.

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Next week I've have my B1 exam and I'd like to practice the writing  wrinting. If someone could CORRECT! correct me this for me

I'd be so grateful!

Dear friend,

I have just got back from a really wonderful holiday in Venice. It was the first time I've been there and now I can say that I´m in love with the city.
I think it's different about the rest of them. The most special were there´s no cars. You can walk around without take care of anything.
I also really like the San MArco Square. It's so impresive.
I know that you've always wanted to travel to Venice and I can assure you that if you went you would never forget it.
Sorry, I forget the most important of all of the place, the food. If you like pasta, it would be your paradise.

I hope I see you soon.
Love, Clara.



I have just gotten back from a really wonderful holiday in Venice. It was the first time I've been there and now I can say that I´m in love with the city. 
I think it's different about than the rest of them. The most special were there´s was that there were no cars. You can could walk around without take care of anything. worrying about them.
I also really like the San MArco Square. It's so impresive. 
I know that you've always wanted to travel to Venice and I can assure you that if you went you would never forget it. 
Sorry, I forget forgot the most important thing of all of the place, the food. If you like pasta, it would be your paradise. 

I hope I see you soon. 
Love, Clara.


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