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During my studies, I developed critical thinking skills and learned how to deal with complex problems in a more systematic way considering gender discrimination, democratic consolidation, and the role of norms in international level. In order to put democratic consolidation’s theory into practice, I have worked in Albania and Bosnia and Herzegovina being an election’s observer.
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Hi Valerie,
Well done again. This is very well-written, with just a few grammar considerations for you.
The phrase 'the role of norms at international level' is perfectly correct, but I somehow feel that an adjective should come before 'norms', particularly due to the formal nature of this text. For example, you might just say 'international norms'.
Hope this helps! Hugh
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During my studies, I developed critical thinking skills and learned how to deal with complex problems in a more systematic way considering regarding gender discrimination, democratic consolidation, and the role of norms in at international level. In order to put democratic consolidation’s theory into practice, I have worked in Albania and Bosnia and Herzegovina being an election’s observer. as an election observer.もっと早く上達したいですか？
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