Cissy's notebook entry: Apr 25, 2010
I feel down these days. Despite the translation task and the tiresome experiments, the relationship between one and another made me maxed out. I am not able to keep smily sometime, tears run out and I have no will to keep them back. After this period busy with the mice and homework I want to take a journey to cheer myself up.
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Cissy's notebook entry: Apr 25, 2010
I feel down these days. Despite the translation task and those tiresome experiments. The relationship between one and another made me out to max.. I am not able to be smily sometime, tears run out and no will keeps them back. After this period busy with the mice and homework, I want to take a journey to cheer myself up.This should do a little help to you.
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Cissy's notebook entry: Apr 25, 2010
I feel down these days. Despite the translation task and the tiresome experiments, the relationship between one and another made me maxed out. I am not able to keep smily sometime, tears run out and I have no will to keep them back. After this period busy with the mice and homework I want to take a journey to cheer myself up.0
In short there's no big errors in your writings. I've made a few adjustments though, I think this looks a bit better:
Cissy's notebook entry: Apr 25, 2010
Hmm, I'm not sure about the preposition 'despite,' internet tells me that it should be 'despite' or 'inspite of.'
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Cissy's notebook entry: Apr 25, 2010
I think you have to use "Despite" with preposition "of" . For examle Despite of something.もっと早く上達したいですか?
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