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Eladio Hurtado
Hitchhiking When you're on a trip, hitchhiking is one alternative, especially for young people. Some benefits of hitchhiking are save money, meet new people and adventure. The possibility to travel to places that you hadn't planed at first is part of fun, the best memories are the results of those spur of the moment decisions. It's likely that you meet nice people during your trip, because I think most travellers are like-minded. On the other hand, when you decide to hitchhike you must struggle with some issues. In my opinion, the worst is the frustration as a result of long time waiting in hard situations. Many people think hitchhiking can be risky, but I rather believe in people. Summarising, hitchhiking is an option when you're on a trip, which in my opinion has more benefits than disadvantages and I hope to do it soon.
2016年7月15日 14:15
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Hitchhiking

Hitchhiking is one alterniative when travelling, especially for young people. Some benefits of hitchhiking include saving money, meeting new people, and adventure. The possibility to travel to places that you hadn't initially planned on is part of the fun; the best memories are the results of those spur of the moment decisions. It's likely that you will meet nice people during your trip, because I think most travellers are like-minded.
On the other hand, when you decide to hitchhike you will also encounter some difficlties. In my opinion, the worst is the frustration as a result of waiting for a long time in hard situations. Many people think hitchhiking can be risky, but I have faith in people.
In summary, hitchhiking is an option when you're on a trip, which in my opinion has more benefits than disadvantages and I hope to do it soon.
2016年7月15日
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Hitchhiking

When you're on a trip, hitchhiking is one alternative, especially for young people. Some benefits of hitchhiking are to: save money, meet new people and have an adventure. The possibility to travel to places that you hadn't planned at first is part of the fun, the best memories are the results of those spur of the moment decisions. It's likely that you meet nice people during your trip, because I think most travellers are like-minded.
On the other hand, when you decide to hitchhike you must struggle with some issues. In my opinion, the worst is the frustration as a result of waiting a long time waiting in hard situations. Many people think hitchhiking can be risky, but I rather believe in people.
Summarising: hitchhiking is an option when you're on a trip, which in my opinion has more benefits advantages than disadvantages and I hope to do it soon.


Great work... here the main thing is word order and common phrases that go together (collocate) well in English:

We were waiting a long time . The words sound better in this order UNLESS you are trying to emphasise the time: We were a long time waiting. This use feels special and marked whereas the other is much more common. More advantages than disadvantages is also a common collocation.

Contractions: You're is okay for informal writing. You are is better for formal writing. The choice depends on what your are writing. This piece feels informal and chatty to me. To make it feel formal you just lose the contractions.

*wrong word: Planed = The wood is planed (smoothed by a machine or tool). Planned = past tense of plan.

Keep up the good work! ^_^


2016年7月15日
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