Could I write you a love letter, Edinburgh?

On the coach to Edinburgh, I was more than impressed by the beauty of nature in Scotland. The ocean of grass and the waves of the barley enfolded me in <font style="background-color: yellow;">a</font> world of green. Just sitting by the window, I could see those lovely groves which were miles away. The plain was so broad that there was no tree to block my sight.

Across the green plains, we came to the city of Edinburgh which is known for its old castles, streets, buildings, traditions and of course, the worldwide art festivals. We went into the National Museum of Scotland to see the history of this beautiful land and appreciated the beauty of objects made by ancient Celts. I learnt that their terrific decoration style all came <font style="background-color: yellow;">from nature</font> and was the abstraction of it. Following the never-ending curls, I felt a connection with these ancient artists.

We wandered around the old streets and took a bus tour around this small city beneath the cloudy sky. We paid a visit to the Edinburgh castle and encountered some bagpipe players <font style="background-color: yellow;">at the corners</font> of the streets. We left the city at dawn, watching this poetic city decorated with a beautiful sunset.

Could I write you a love letter, Edinburgh? Your beauty is beyond my expression, <font style="background-color: yellow;">yet</font> I am still willing to use my <font style="background-color: yellow;">inadequate</font> words to show my love to you!

<font style="background-color: yellow;">Your English level is absolutely terrific! I was blown away when I read this. </font>

<font style="background-color: yellow;">There are hardly any mistakes in this, the only corrections I have made are to make the sentences flow better.
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