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Find a Man to Talk Hello,everybody,do u free now? I wanna fina a friend to talk in English about culture or something others,do u wanna go with me?

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Find a Man to Talk

Hello, everybody. do Are u free now?
I wanna finad a friend to talk in English about culture or something others else. Do you wanna go with me?

Hi,

I have made some corrections, things to watch out for:

1, you need to leave a space after a comma or dot/full stop or colon or semicolon or question marks

2, the first letter of a sentence is always Capital letter

3, I am unsure of your last sentence. did you mean:

- Do you want to go out with me? (as meeting up in person)

- Do you want to link up with me? (as online, such skype)  

4, It is might be better to keep the sentences simple and free of slang.  Using 'u' instead of 'you' and 'wanna' instead of 'want to' not professional. It is ok for your friends but don't get used to them, as in professional setting (such as work) it might gives a bad impression.  


Don't worry too much, you doing great. 

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