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For happier future Someone told me about group of foreign brave students.They set a ambitious and charitable goal is support Indian teenagers from indigent families get qualitative education and job abroad! For me that's is really impact to society! Students helped them to learn new subjects and pass exams successfully. I hope I can to repeat this experience. I was started by small step. I came to India on volunteer intership and worked in school with kids from Kaljanpuri's slums, Delhi. I think my teaching plan wasn't be professional and systematic. But I sure that's drawing, learning new English words and reading were helped kids to feel unity and equality between each other. Further is more. I believe our communication became reason to learning good for happier future.

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For a happier future

Someone told me about a group of foreign brave students.They set an ambitious and charitable goal to support Indian teenagers from indigent families by getting qualitative education and jobs abroad! For me that's is a great impact to society! Students helped them to learn new subjects and pass exams successfully. I hope I can to repeat this experience.

I was started with a small step.
I came to India as a volunteer and worked in a school with kids from Kaljanpuri's slums, Delhi.

I think my teaching plan wasn't be professional and systematic. But I am sure that's drawing, learning new English words and reading were helped kids to feel unity and equality between each other. Further is more.
I believe our communication became a reason to learning good for a happier future.
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For a happier future

Someone told me about a group of brave, foreign students.They set an ambitious and charitable goal to support Indian teenagers from indigent families by getting qualitative education and jobs abroad! For me that's is a great impact to society! Students helped them to learn new subjects and pass exams successfully. I hope I can to repeat this experience.

I was started with a small step.


I came to India as a volunteer and worked in a school with kids from Kaljanpuri's slums, Delhi. 

I think my teaching plan wasn't be professional and systematic. But I am sure that's drawing, learning new English words and reading were helped kids to feel unified and equal between each other. Further is more.

I believe our communication became a reason to learning good for a happier future.

Great job! Note that with the verb 'feel', you must use an adjective rather than a noun.

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When using more than one adjective at a time there is a certain order in which to use them. I would suggest that you say " brave, foreign students" It sounds better and the order of the adjectives is correct.

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