Waves (correct my mistakes please)
AM waves are loaded by adjusting capacity. The data on the carrier is added through the change in the capacity of the wave (its length from top to bottom). This system began to decline due to poor sound quality compared to FM waves.
PM waves are usually used to broadcast world news and events, the most notable disadvantages being confusing the stations during the change and are affected by confusion but characterized as long-term and can operate outside the cities and easy to build.
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Waves
AM waves are loaded by adjusting capacity. The data on the carrier is added through the change in the capacity of the wave (its length from top to bottom). This system began to decline due to poor sound quality compared to FM waves.PM waves are usually used to broadcast world news and events. The most notable disadvantages are confusing the stations during the transition, which and are then affected by the confusion. However, PM waves are characterized as long-term, and can operate outside the cities, and are easy to build.
The first paragraph is very clear, but the second paragraph is a little jumbled, grammatically and semantically. You need to establish the connection between your nouns and pronouns more clearly. Part of this is probably just my ignorance of the subject, but I found it difficult to trace the logic of the second paragraph, so my corrections may not reflect your meaning even though they are syntactically sound.
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