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Could you correct my diary? I taught English grammar for my house mates. They appriciated me. I was so happy cause one of my dream is help somebody's English study using my English skills. But the other hand, nasty feeling came up to me. While they had been hunging out I studied a lot, so now I can teach it to them. Am I obnoxious?

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Could you correct my diary?

I taught English grammar for to my housemates (also: roomates).
They appreciated me.
I was so happy because one of my dreams is to use my English skills to help somebody's English  study English.using my English skills.
But the other hand, nasty feeling came up to me started feeling nasty.(Why?) 
While they had been hunging were hanging out, I studied a lot, so now I can teach it to them.
Am I obnoxious? (This is grammatically correct, but it seems out of place. Why would you be obnoxious? Is this what you meant to ask?)


Not bad - but some of the sentences don't work so well with the others.

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Could you correct my diary?

I taught English grammar for my house mates.
They appriciated me.
I was so happy cause one of my dream is using my English skills to  help somebody learn English.
But on the other hand, nasty feeling came up to me.
While they were hunging out I studied a lot, so now I can teach it to them.
Am I obnoxious?


I'm not for sure since I'm not native speaker.

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Could you correct my diary entry?

I taught English grammar for my house mates.
They appriciated me.
I was so happy cause one of my dreams is to help somebody's English study using my English skills.
But, on the other hand, a nasty feeling came up to me.
While they had been hanging out I studied a lot, so now I can teach it to them.
Am I obnoxious?

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