Exercise # 5 - IELTS Hello, there! Could someone help me with correcting these paragraphs, please? Thanks in advance. PS: I haven't attached the pie charts because I don't have them on hand. The pie graphs displays the outcomes of a survey conducted on children showing their cultural and leisure activities by genre. Overall, both boys and girls enjoyed listening to music, although a bigger number of girls were keen to read compared to boys. Computer games was the most preferable leisure activity in comparison to girls, who chose dancing as their favourite sport. Moving on to the first graph, what can be seen is that playing computer games accounted for almost a third of the preferences among boys. That activity was closely followed by basketball, which was the second largest activity chosen by boys, representing approximately a quarter of the interests of boys, in terms of percentages. Then, playing soccer and skateboarding came as less prefereable activities enjoyed by boys, at 17% and 11%, respectively. Reading, is the least interesting cultural activity for boys, depicted only 2%. Taking a close look at the second graph, girls prefered dancing over the rest of the activities, representing more than a quarter of their preferences as a whole. Similarly, reading was the second most important cultural activity for girls, in contrast to boys, at 21% rate. Listening to music, just like boys, accounted for 10% of the total. Gymnastics is the least enjoyable activity for girls, with a proportion of only 11%.