advantages/disvantages of going to work on foot or by bike.
First at all, you will be more healthy. A lot of surveys confirm that walking at least 3 kilometres a day will improve you health,having less probabilities of blood system deceases(like heart attacks or cholesterol) or overweight related deceases. Also,other surveys find a correlation between doing phisical exercise and having a better mood.
Futhermore, you could save a lot of money. Annual expenses in public transport tickets could be more than 1,000$ ,and in some expensive cities could be even more than 1,500$.
Moreover, you will contribute to reduce the climatic change, or at least, not worsening it , by not using vehicles. Climatic change is one of the most challenging problems for the future, you should contribute to live on a better planet.
Altought going on foot/bike has advantages,it also has disvantages. The most important ones are the wheater (rain,cold etc..) and the time to get to work will increase a lot.
In conclusion, going to work on foot/bike has a lot of advantages and is highly recommend if your work is not very far from your home and you live on a country with a decent wheather.
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The advantages/disadvantages of going to work on foot or by bike.
Firstly, you would be more healthy. Studies confirm that walking at least 3 kilometres a day will improve your health, reduce the risk of medical conditions like heart attacks, high cholesterol or overweight-related issues. Also, other study find a positive correlation between doing physical exercise and having a better mood.Furthermore, you could save a lot of money. Annual expenses in public transport tickets can be more than 1,000$ ,and in some expensive cities, it could even even more than 1,500$.
Moreover, if you go to work by bike, you will contribute to reduce the climate change, and not worsen it , by not using vehicles. Climate change is one of the most challenging problems for the future, so you should contribute to live on a better planet.
Although going on foot/bike has advantages, it also has disadvantages, which includes the weather (rain,cold etc..) and it takes longer to get to work.
In conclusion, going to work on foot/bike has a lot of advantages, and it is highly recommendable if your work is not very far from your home and you live in a country with a decent weather.
thanks in advance!
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advantages/disadvantages of going to work on foot or by bike.
First at of all, you will be more healthy. A lot of surveys confirm that walking at least 3 kilometres a day will improve your health, having with less probability of blood system circulatory diseases (like heart attacks or high cholesterol) or overweight related diseases. Also, other surveys find a correlation between doing physical exercise and having a better mood.Furthermore, you could can save a lot of money. Annual expenses in cost public transport tickets could can be more than $1,000 ,and in some expensive cities could can be even more than $1,500.
Moreover, you will contribute to reduce the a reduction in climate change, or at least not worsening it, by not using vehicles. Climate change is one of the most challenging problems for the future, you should contribute to living on a better planet.
Althought going on foot/bike has advantages, it also has disadvantages. The most important ones are the weather (rain,cold etc..) and the time it takes to get to work will increase a lot.
In conclusion, going to work on foot/bike has a lot of advantages and is highly recommended if your work is not very far from your home and you live in a country with a decent weather.
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It's more natural to say "walk" than "to go on foot".
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advantages/disvantages of going to work on foot or by bike.
You need an introductory sentence: There are a lot of advantages to walking or biking to work.
First at all, you will be more healthy.(healthier) A lot of surveys confirm Research has shown that walking at least 3 kilometres a day will improve your health, help lower your risk of heart attack or diseases related to obesity and perhaps lower your cholesterolhaving less probabilities of blood system deceases(like heart attacks or cholesterol) or overweight related deceases. Research has also found a correlation between doing physical exercise and having a better mood.Futhermore, you could save a lot of money. public transport tickets can cost from $1,000 to more than $1,500 annually.
Moreover, you will contribute to reducing (alternate: you will help reduce) the the effects of climatic change, or at least, not worsening it , by not using a vehicles. Climate change is one of the most challenging problems for the future, and by walking or cycling, you could contribute to making a better planet.
Altought going on foot/bike has advantages,it also has disvantages. The most important ones are the weather (rain,cold etc..) and the additional time needed to get to work .
In conclusion, going to work on foot/bike has a lot of advantages and is highly recommend if your work is not very far from your home and you live in an area with a decent weather.
Note: surveys just give people's opinions, research goes further and makes sense of data and gives conclusions. This is why I changed 'survey' to 'research' in your essay.
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