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Introduction I wanted to spend some time correcting others before I start writing this stuff myself, but the thing is, all the texts in Russian already have several corrections (usually more than 5), so that is sort of redundant. This is a usual I-don't-know-what-to-write-about entry. As for myself, my first language is Russian, as you might already have guessed, I speak English quite fluently and I also study German. Now my main focus is English, because I want to master it to a really good level. Ideally, I would like to become a fiction writer someday. I am also attracted by the idea of writing articles. So, that is it for today. Leave a comment if you have read this far; I would very much appreciate it.

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Introduction

I wanted to spend some time correcting others before I started writing this stuff myself but, the thing is, all the texts in Russian already have several corrections (usually more than 5), so that is sort of redundant.
This is a typical I-don't-know-what-to-write-about entry.
As for myself, my first language is Russian, as you might already have guessed. I speak English quite fluently and I also study German. Now my main focus is English because I want to master it to a really good level*. Ideally, I would like to become a fiction writer someday. I am also attracted by the idea of writing articles.
So that is it for today. Leave a comment if you have read this far. I would very much appreciate it.

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*I think it will suffice to simply say you want to master English because it's understood that mastering it would be "to a really good level". Some people might have something different to say in regards to the commas, but I've altered them in a way that makes a bit more sense to me. Corrections highlighted in blue are more suggestions of how to make things sound that little bit more natural but, ultimately, they are just optional.

Best of luck in your English language learning and broader writing endeavours! I think it's great that you've been trying to correct people's notebooks too. That really helps the community. Of course, if you're finding that there are already lots of corrections for Russian entries, getting involved in the Russian language discussion posts is also helpful for learners who can learn by reading your comments. ;)

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It does feel redundant correcting entries that already have corrections but it sometimes helps a learner to see several different (correct/natural) ways to say something. And sometimes correctors make mistakes (even if they're native speakers) and multiple corrections helps them decipher which corrections(/correctors) are worth paying more attention to.
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There is nothing to correct that I can see, good job! :)

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