Some story
It was the early 20th century. Three sisters lived together in a house in Poland. One of them got acquainted with a young soldier and moved with him to Russia. The other two sisters emigrated to the United States, after which daughter one of them became a lover of President John F. Kennedy. The sister in Russia didn't like her life there, she suffered. The sisters in the U.S. helped her as much as possible, but she stayed in Russia and had a daughter...
Please correct me
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Some story
In early 20th century, in some Polish house lived three sisters, then when/and one of them gets acquainted with the young military and moves with him to Russia. Two other sisters emigrated to the United States, after which one of them became a lover of the President named John Kennedy. The sister from who lived in Russia didn't like her life there. She suffered. The sisters helped as could as possible as they possibly could/as much as they possibly could/as much as possible. But she stayed in Russia and had a daughter...Please correct me
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Some story
Early 20th century. In some Polish house live three sisters, then one of them gets acquainted with the young military and moves with him to Russia . Two other sisters emigrated to the United States, after which one of them became a lover of the President named John Kennedy. Sister from Russia didn't like her life there. She suffered. The sisters helped as could as possible. But she stayed in Russia and had a daughter...Please correct me
It was the early 20th century. Three sisters lived together in a house in Poland. One of them got acquainted with a young soldier and moved with him to Russia. The other two sisters emigrated to the United States, after which one of them became a lover of President John F. Kennedy (1961-63, not the early 20th century). The sister in Russia didn't like her life there, she suffered. The sisters in the U.S. helped her as much as possible, but she stayed in Russia and had a daughter.
I changed some of your tenses, for consistency.
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It was the early 20th century. In some Polish house lived three sisters, then one of them became acquainted with the young military a young man in the military and moved with him to Russia. The two other sisters emigrated to the United States, after which one of them became a lover of the President, named John Kennedy. The sister from in Russia didn't like her life there. She suffered. The sisters helped her as much as they could as possible, but she stayed in Russia and had a daughter...
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Some story
Early 20th century. In some Polish house live three sisters, then one of them gets acquainted with a young military man and moves with him to Russia. The two other sisters emigrated to the United States, after which one of them became the (if you say "a", it means she's one out of others) lover of the President named John Kennedy. Her sister in Russia didn't like her life there. She suffered. The sisters helped as could as possible. But she stayed in Russia and had a daughter...もっと早く上達したいですか？
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