Truck driver dies on Pardue Avenue, Houston (TX)
The 40-years-truck driver of WALMART Martin Falopillo, died after get involved in a traffic jam on Pardue Avenue, Houston (TX) . The accident has happened around 10AM on this thurday and involved others three cars and one motobiker.
According to firefighters and rescue squad, a silver BMW had blocked the way and the truck driver didn't have time enough to brake and avoid the collison. The victim crashed his truck both on the walls and the car followed by others cars and motobike.
The rescue squad had arrived minutes later but the driver didn't resist the leg and chest injuries and died on the local.
Martin left three kids and one wife, his origin is identified from Guatemala and obtained a working visa to stay in US last year. The WALMART company didn't reply our questions about the fatality.
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Truck driver dies on Pardue Avenue, Houston (TX)
A 40 year old truck driver of WALMART, Martin Falopillo, died after getting involved caught in a traffic jam (do you mean crash instead of jam?) on Pardue Avenue, Houston (TX) . The accident has happened around 10AM on this thurday and involved others three other cars and one motorcyclist.
According to firefighters and the rescue squad, a silver BMW had blocked the way, and the truck driver didn't have time enough (either use “he didn’t have time” OR “he didn’t have enough time”) to brake and to / in order to avoid the collison. The victim crashed his truck both on the walls and the other cars followed by others cars and along with the motobike.
The rescue squad had arrived minutes later but the driver didn't resist survive the leg and chest injuries, and died on the local.at the scene.
Martin left three kids and one wife, his origin is identified he was identified as being originally from Guatemala and had obtained a working visa to stay in US last year. The WALMART company didn't reply to our questions about the fatality.
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