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Hi, friends! Can you correct the mistakes in this letter? Thank you very much!
Dear Sally,
It feels like such a long time since the last time we met. Thank you for your letter and your shopping experience. It seems that your shopping trip to France was as convivial as mine shopping trip to Germany.
Last month I visited Berlin. When I first saw the German stores, I was thrilled. The traders were shouting and hawking their goods. There were a variety of clothes, shoes and lot's of other mainly used goods sold in the city centre of Berlin. I also found some wacky fashion statements and clothes for people with conservative tastes at one of the boutique stores. Regrettably, the prices were too high for me. That's way I highly recommend you to take much money with you if you ever do your shopping in Germany. However, I couldn't away empty-handed, so I bought flowery sweaters for all my relatives.
I also found some butcher's, greengrocer's and supermarkerts on Müller street. The air was filled with aromatic smell there. I bought some game meats for 10 euros at one of the butcher's in that street. It was so delicious that my mouth was watering. I also tried some exotic fruit and vegetables at the greengrocer's. And, of course, I bought a handicraft for you at the most famous department store in Berlin.
Well, I think it's time to say "bye". I hope that my story aren't the biggest boredom in the world. I am looking forward to seeing you soon.
Sincerely,
Your friend
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You should wroted in Notebook.
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