give your thoughts on this poem I wrote The sky was shaking......... with my sight focused on the ground insecurity was reigning (or raining) I lifted up my eyes, and reality was found just

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give your thoughts on this poem I wrote The sky was shaking......... with my sight focused on the ground insecurity was reigning (or raining) I lifted up my eyes, and reality was found just a small puddle in my life

2008年9月16日 13:08

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Great.

2008年9月16日

good theme， if the order of some words changed， then how ...

2008年9月17日

Good! write some more.. But this time include the word darkness.. Or sorrow.. Thanks

2008年9月16日

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