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Dajia Hao! Wo Jiao Iman. Wo Jinnian ShiJiu Sui, wo shi Malaixiya ren. Wo xianzai bu gongzuo, dan wo shi yi ming daxuesheng. Wo xihuan ti zu qiu he hua huar. Wo ye ai timg yin yue he kan dian shi. Hen hao! Wo Xue waiyu hen you yisi. Renshi nimen hen gaoxing. Xie xie, zaijian.