Aimira
please rectify my sentence if heart doesn't stay in proper harbor, nowhere is housing
2016年11月4日 16:05
回答 · 7
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I'm not sure what you are trying to say, but I'll reword it into a few sentences that an English speaker would understand. "If your heart doesn't stay where it should, nowhere is home" "If your heart isn't in the right place, nowhere is home". "If your hear isn't in the proper harbor, you're not home". It isn't correct to say "nowhere is housing"...it should say "home is nowhere" or "nowhere is home". It's also incorrect to say "if heart...". It should be "if the heart..." or "if your/her/his heart". You should also use "the" before "harbor". I hope this helps.
2016年11月4日
thanks I got it
2016年11月5日
Hi Aimiraliang. It’s not incorrect to write “Please rectify my sentence”, but it sounds very formal and it’s not common. People would normally write “Please correct my sentence.”
2016年11月4日
HELLO
2016年11月4日
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