1) It takes me ages to get to work, although (2) it’s only a few miles from my house to the office. (I think this is ok; you can say "takes" instead of "took" if you mean that it always takes a long time, since simple present is used for situations that are always true.) (3) There isn't too much traffic on the roads when I leave home, but (4) there's impossible to park by the time I reach the city centre. (Should be "it's impossible to park) (5) There are always loads of cars driving around looking for a space and these are days (6) there are parking meters, so you have to pay. (This sentence sounds a bit odd; makes it sounds like the cars are driving around on their own looking for spaces. It might be better to say, "There are always many drivers looking around for a space, because these days there are parking meters so you have to pay.") 7) There used to be company bus, but they stopped it because (8) there were only a few of us that used it. (the use of "they" is a bit vague; who is "they" referring to in this sentence?) (9) It‘s all right for those people with a motorbike, but (10) there really tedious for us car drivers! (Should be, "it is really tedious")

Tatiana, thank you, you helped me a lot!

i assume that the main mistake is just the same - you should use past tenses instead of present. 1) It TOOK me ages; 3) there WASN'T too much traffic; Next mistake - excessive use of THERE 4) It was impossible |not there| 10) IT IS really tedious for us |not there| 8) just "because only few of us"